Evaluation of Draft Video

We have been given feedback for our draft video and the editing is not what it should be, we are hoping that when we can add more footage into this and edit it differently it will look a lot better. We also need to re-take some of the shots as our artist doesn't have the best facial expressions and it puts across the wrong image of what we want her to look like. We also need to consider the weather on this as it is quite dull so if we are still going to use some of this footage again we need to make sure it is the same as the old footage. Other things we are not particullary happy with are the outfits of our artist although we like them we feel they need to be more different from eachother, therefore we will try and include more different styles when we re-take and add more footage into it.