Variety of shots and type
Good Track List
Text- needs to be clearer.
- change front cover image- no eye contact, difficult for the audience to connect.
- different locations for shots needed- school not ideal
- recording company logo needed
- prodicer notes/lyrics/credits needed
Magazine Advert-
- actual image of 'Skye' works but wall looks odd
- no exclamation mark for 'Fast Car' needed
- stars dont look authentic or where they're from made clear
- name of album needed
Digi-Pak-
- Choose better mise en scene/ different picture possibly link to the eachother
- need website, record company, logo
- change position of the text
After reviewing all my statements from the feedback sheet given by my teacher i intend to make these adjustments first, and then make further adaptations to fit in with the changed ancillary texts oncce the adaptations have been made. I will get fellow class mates to give an overview opinion of each of my text and then also take into consideration any constructive comments that i agree or see possible advantages from.
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